Feedback and revisions

The feedback I received for my project were on the small details of the project. My cover page needs a new photo to truly grab the consumer. I had an over-the-shoulder look at my subject and the feedback I got was that I need to have her facing forward and smiling. I plan to change my picture with a new subject. These changes will allow my magazine cover to be more appealing to the audience I intend to reach. The articles presented on the cover page and my title were not very conventional for a health and wellness magazine. I had a text outline for the articles and title and I plan to get rid of those outlines. I saw the cover photo of one of the students who presented in my class. Her cover looked professionally done, so I plan to make my cover have a more professional appeal as well. Part of my plan to achieve this is to add some more article titles to the cover with some descriptions of the articles. I will align the text more toward the sides to show they are small articles featured. I also want to make the article I wrote a bigger font that stands out more.  After this, my magazine should have that appeal that will cause someone to pick it up when they are in the checkout at the store. I was missing page numbers on the bottom of my magazine pages, so I plan to incorporate those. I also plan to create a fake website to put next to the page numbers to follow the conventions of magazines. All of this is to improve the professional grade of my magazine.

 I also plan to edit my cover template because I have a picture from google to hold the place of the photo. I will remove the photo and simply use some lines to map out where the photo will go. In regard to my article content, I plan to shore up my points. I was over the page limit when I originally wrote it, so I plan to use some of the original text to make my article stronger in its message. I want my points to be simple enough for the reader to understand, but complex enough that they keep on reading the article. All, but one, of the photos I used were taken by myself. To address this problem, I plan to schedule another photo shoot with a few new subjects to recreate that photo and add a few more photos to capture the concept of meditation. This will allow the reader to really capture the meaning I am trying to portray in the article. The brand name of my magazine needs some changes to make it stand out and look conventional. I plan to change the font, color, and boldness of it. These revisions will allow my magazine to have more of a visual appeal and therefore appeal to the audience I'm targeting.